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Gents I hav written a book and want to test a chapter. can i trust anyone to read and crtitique?

Posted: 06 Aug 2024, 18:28
by Pentonville
illl either post it or send it.

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Posted: 07 Aug 2024, 21:31
by BBondsBootlaces
;)

Re: Gents I hav written a book and want to test a chapter. can i trust anyone to read and crtitique?

Posted: 07 Aug 2024, 20:31
by Pentonville
ill make u a roast xx

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Posted: 07 Aug 2024, 20:13
by BBondsBootlaces
Didn't realize you were the sensitive sort Pentonville. Bit of banter and you want to carve people up.

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Posted: 07 Aug 2024, 19:58
by Pentonville
i do comedy too my good friend lee xx but that blooke is a dickhead for that comment

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Posted: 07 Aug 2024, 19:55
by Lee Trundle
"""i cry my friend but its usually when im carving up a dickhead westham fan."" Am I wrong to laugh at that?"

Re: Gents I hav written a book and want to test a chapter. can i trust anyone to read and crtitique?

Posted: 07 Aug 2024, 19:47
by Pentonville
BBondsBootlaces 6:58 Wed Aug 7 ask the peoploe on here ive met. see if u would genuinely say that to my face. see the lives ive saved on here in person by showing up and actaully saving them and then those ive had to fuck up. i lovea good troll but i wont entertain pussies. do ur researxh. i cry my friend but its usually when im carving up a dickhead westham fan. there is absolutely nothing on this thread that requires a bad comment or a troll comment. be kind and be west ham.

Re: Gents I hav written a book and want to test a chapter. can i trust anyone to read and crtitique?

Posted: 07 Aug 2024, 19:42
by Pentonville
"ive sent it to 3 people and a wife of one. ill put it up even if they dont like it, but let me see their thoughts first. its what i call the bridge chapter. up until this point, the story is about sexual abuse and physical abuse and fighting for west ham then getting a job with west ham but then it shows how i transitioned into music so for me chapter8 is the bridge. its important for me to see if the bridge shows a bridge and a change. i want their honest views. if they like or dislike, ill still put it up but lets give them a day or so. its quite long lol thanl you so much for the support"

Re: Gents I hav written a book and want to test a chapter. can i trust anyone to read and crtitique?

Posted: 07 Aug 2024, 18:58
by BBondsBootlaces
I bet you've written more books than you have read.

Re: Gents I hav written a book and want to test a chapter. can i trust anyone to read and crtitique?

Posted: 07 Aug 2024, 18:18
by smartypants
"Well done, thats quite an achievement. I’d be interested to read an extract on here if you want to put it up"

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Posted: 07 Aug 2024, 16:34
by punter
was it green?

Re: Gents I hav written a book and want to test a chapter. can i trust anyone to read and crtitique?

Posted: 07 Aug 2024, 14:43
by joe blob
I read a book once.

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Posted: 07 Aug 2024, 12:19
by panamahat
"All the best with it Pents , my interest is piqued as well !"

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Posted: 07 Aug 2024, 03:35
by Texas Iron
What’s it about…? Who Mail me… Will review if it’s in my bailiwick…

Re: Gents I hav written a book and want to test a chapter. can i trust anyone to read and crtitique?

Posted: 07 Aug 2024, 02:05
by Pentonville
"i have had 2 offers to do so and have emailed them for their email addys, thanks very much for the positive reoplies gents, once the 2 guys have read it, im happy for them to say what they think on this thread. honesty is best."

Re: Gents I hav written a book and want to test a chapter. can i trust anyone to read and crtitique?

Posted: 07 Aug 2024, 01:49
by rubble
"I'll have a look, if you like."

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Posted: 07 Aug 2024, 00:31
by Matthew Holmes
"Well done Pents. Takes massive effort to make a book And balls to allow others to give their batshit views on it, Good luck Whomail me that chapter I’ll try to read it but if I don’t manage don’t take it personal My life is hectic with capital H and time is scarce"

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Posted: 07 Aug 2024, 00:12
by Mex Martillo
"Interesting, sounds a bit like an English testament."

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Posted: 06 Aug 2024, 23:35
by Westham67
Morris dancing and sodomy would be my guess Mex

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Posted: 06 Aug 2024, 23:10
by Mex Martillo
What's it about?

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Posted: 06 Aug 2024, 18:32
by Pentonville
"willing to post chapter 8 and totally can accept genuine critique. not trolling. its with a few agents at moment and im trying to guage if their exctiement or dismissal is fair. if we can delete anyone who comments cսnt for no reasojn, ill post the entire chapter. if we cant guarnatee it then message me and ill send it you."